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CHAPTER FOUR: Joe moved closer to Nick, confused. "Come again?" Nick bent down, gently moving the girl's head to the side and touched the edge of the mask. "Look how tightly it's plastered onto her skin. My guess is he drugged her, plastered over her face, and let her suffocate to death." Miley exhaled slowly. "This crime is even more different than I thought. He made the mask while his victim was alive instead of doing it after she died..." Nick nodded slowly. "He's evolving." "Exactly. And when a killer this precise, this methodical, this disciplined, still has room to evolve..." "That's trouble." "Yeah. A lot of it." An officer walked up to Nick and Miley. "Hey! Nick! You might want to see this!" Nick turned towards the officer, noticing that he was holding a black-light over to body. The officer pointed to an inking on her arm. "Look what I found!" Nick studied the inside of the girl's wrists. A stamp of a circle of animals from the Chinese zodiac showed up. "Wait a minute, I know that stamp. That's from the Zen Club in Chinatown. It's an upscale bar and karaoke club. Given how crisp the image is, I'm guessing she was there last night." Miley nodded fast. "Someone there must have seen something." "Well, Special Agent Cyrus, looks like we got a lead." He chuckled, giving her a gentle wink. Miley rolled her eyes. "Ugh." Nick drove Miley to Chinatown. She went over her paperwork in stony silence. "Not much of a talker, are you? Too busy profiling?" Nick teased. "As a ...

  1. hereeanelenastory2
    1. Yes. I fins it quite funny. 2. I love this so far. 3. Whenever you feel like it.
    January 30, 2011
  2. Jobrosfanish
    @Brie651 NP Brie, if u want to make it into a real book, maybe use different names otherwise ur good
    January 30, 2011
  3. Brie651
    @Jobrosfanish THANK YOU so much!!!
    January 30, 2011
  4. Jobrosfanish
    Well done Brie, you know how to keep the audience always wanting more. You will be a awesome writer someday. Ur BFF
    January 30, 2011
  5. Brie651
    @girlgamer225 oh! LOL Demi will be coming in soon-ish :) LOL
    January 30, 2011
  6. Brie651
    @SaraHaley77 aahhh graziii!!!
    January 30, 2011
  7. Brie651
    @kikkianna98 hehe all right :) i think i'll do every other
    January 30, 2011
  8. Brie651
    @xfamexmonsterx LOL thank you SO much! im glad u could picture it in ur head!!!
    January 30, 2011
  9. SaraHaley77
    1. UM YES!!! Lol it's hilarious!!!!! 2. UMMMM I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! it's like my FAV out of your stories!(: 3. IDK BUT ALOT!!! Lol no, i know how hard that is, ummmm maybe every other day?(: lol loved it hun, and for the millionth time, im like obsessed
    January 29, 2011
  10. girlgamer225
    1. haaha i think there very hilarious and obvious connection 2.YOUR AWESOME DUDE! LIKE SERIOSULY!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES BUT WHERE DEMI?!!?! tehe =) 3.*couch* alot *cough* opps sry my throat hurts ;)
    January 29, 2011
  11. HayleyWrites
    this is so awesome! 1. yess we get to know their characters without you just telling us 2. it's amazing! 3. like every other day probably?
    January 29, 2011
  12. kikkianna98
    1. So amazing, so....NCIS. love it <3 2. I agree with lindseynicholee because its SO unique! 3.I want more! every day! jk, whenever you want :)
    January 29, 2011
  13. YupImJustMEx3
    1. Yesss i love it.(: 2. I love this story:D 3.Whenever you feel like it.
    January 29, 2011
  14. ilovekhmerteehee
    1) HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I love it. Like usually when there a talk between boy and a girl, they usually talk about their feeling and stuff like that but this couple is something. I love it sooooo, like I can't seriously wait to see Miley falling for him. Will
    January 29, 2011
  15. IWBTFYbySW
    1. Yes it is adorable 2. I love it ;) 3. All the time would be wonderful :D
    January 29, 2011
  16. xfamexmonsterx
    1: How they talk to each other is hilarious to me. I can picture them in the car arguing as i read it. lmao 2: I thought it was amazing, i love the character interactions! 3: DAILY! haha
    January 29, 2011
  17. lindseynicholee
    @Brie651 LOL, I know. I saw you posted ten minutes ago and it already had four views and i was like "OH NO! I HAVE TO BE FIRST" so EVEN THOUGH, I was walking about the door to my house and everybody's WAITING ON ME, i read the story for you. ;D &That's a
    January 29, 2011
  18. Brie651
    @lindseynicholee ahh thanks! ur almost always my 1st comment hehe ;) about #3 LOL that was what i was planning to do. prob every other day? maybe? LOL
    January 29, 2011
  19. lindseynicholee
    1. LOVE IT. holy crap. it's so back and forth. i loveeee it. :D 2. um. this story is my favorite... all of youtube... no doubt. 3. ALL OF IT RIGHT NOW. no just kidding. It's fun to keep people on their toes. BUT NOT TO LONG or they'll forget about it. (:
    January 29, 2011